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The Real End of the Story by ~Kite-J:iconKite-J:



Note: Jet - the one and only Dark Ace

The Real End of the Story... aka The Punishment

The leader of the storm hawks stood casually looking out onto the hanger and runway of the Condor. The open doors allowed a warm breeze to swirl around the cavernous bay carrying in the faint scent of soapy water. Both him and his engineer were looking on as Jet scrubbed the deck on his hands and knees with Aerrow sitting on his back. The youngsters two were having fun in spite of the daunting punishment.

"Are you sure you want to keep him on team after that stunt? It took both Nora and young Kite to keep Corsair from having him scrub ‘Saharr’ clean. I mean, he joined the race AND knocked another sky knight off his ride - just to beat you." the engineer argued in a quiet unsure voice. The stoic sky knight seemed too busy looking at the two with a amiable smile.

"He's just eager and talented. He'll make a great sky knight if the academy can weed out that ruthless competitive nature of his. We had a little talk about the incident and how it doesn't befit a member of a sky knight squadron, let alone the Storm Hawks." he said dismissively as he crossed his arms.

The teenager and toddler were completely unaware as they played “skyride”. Jet had a small scrub brush in each hand as he scooted along the floor making “vroom” noises.

"Faster!" Aerrow laughed. Jet then picked his knees up off the floor and started pushing the brushes around by walking with his feet. He was soon at a good fast pace going from edge to edge with little Aerrow clinging tightly to his neck and shoulders. The fun lasted until they ran into the scrub bucket, knocking it over. The two fell over laughing and soaked as the puddle from the bucket began spreading across the deck.

The engineer looked on in annoyance as the squad leader laughed.

"Aerrow!" he called to his son. "Why don't you help Jet out by getting some towels." he said. The little boy wrung out his shirt and gave a "Kay!" before darting off for a linen closet. The smile on Jet’s face lasted until he caught sight of his superior. A slight scowl soon emerged as he went back to scrubbing.

“Aren’t you worried he’s going to be a bad influence on Aerrow?” the nervous tone in the engineer’s voice persisted. Regardless, the sky knight easily responded.

“No, he’s different when he’s around Aerrow. Look.” He gestured as Aerrow returned with a towel and tossed it playfully over Jet’s head. The little redheaded boy then started helping the teenager dry his black locks as the two giggled. “Jet seems to only pull those stunts when he’s alone. For some reason, Aerrow makes him forget he has something to prove.” He finished as he turned and headed back towards the bridge. His engineer nodded, before changed the subject to the ship’s refueling needs.



After his dad left, Aerrow picked up a spare brush and silently began helping Jet scrub the massive deck with a gleeful smile. The two worked late into the evening with only a few sponge/brush fights.

It was past dinner when Jet looked up from their finished work to find a huddled Aerrow asleep on a crate. He smiled warmly as he walked over and scooped up the little boy’s weight into his arms. Despite the aching in his back and limbs, he carried his little companion to their shared room and woke him up briefly so to get ready for bed. Soon Aerrow was in his jammies nuzzled against a pillow as Jet dragged his lean frame to bed and crashed. He was dead to the world when Aerrow woke up, climbed into his bed, and kissed him on the temple before cuddling up next to his best friend and future enemy.

(PS. Jet did not win the race... thanks to fate, he lost and would have been left rolling in the sand if not for his squad leader... had fate been kind, he would have left them all in the dust)
©2008-2010 ~Kite-J
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This was a journal entry that I posted since someone wanted to fav it. :heart:

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LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ILU2 Silver!
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YAYYY!!!!!!!

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I shall fav this as well!!! ^///^

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Thanks Twilight... I'm really glad you liked it... sadly I missed a few typos :doh: I hate when I do that :shakefist:
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This is AWESOME! What I love about your Storm Hawks writing is 1) that I think you really get the Dark Ace, and 2) that you think of things I never did. Like, I never thought of the possibility that the DA and Aerrow knew each other when Aerrow was all tiny and adorable.

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LOL actually "2)" was given to me by :iconthedarkace:. But I've adopted the theory as my own and taken it into my lil world :heart:.

You can so see it happening though. This meshes well with my DA who had younger siblings... lil Aerrow being dumped on him because the leader's busy and Jet is use to babysitting.

I'm glad you liked it! :hug:
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Ah ha ha, okay. I do that with my friends' fandom ideas too... :iconxxkagerouxx: has sold me on soooo many fandom world conventions.

I hope you're gonna write more soon! :glomp:

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Workin on it! Though I have yet to finish the second story... I am getting lots of neat visions. I just need to hammer out some details. Daydreaming about it is the best way... ideas just float through my head.

For instance, I want there to be some kind of a trap waiting for the storm hawks that separates them. I want Aerrow to play a small part in the last conflict between Kite and the Dark Ace. Kite isn't a match for DA now that he knows her moves... though he would never fatally wound her no matter how enraged... I know he would try to stop her from getting up again... before he deals that blow, I want Aerrow to manage grabbing him in a headlock from behind. So that means I need to craft Aerrow's trap well so that he doesn't have his weapons, can't enter the fight, but as DA backs up - Aerrow has a chance to help Kite.

Kite as well would never deal a fatal blow, but just the same, she has to stop him from continuing the fight... there's another problem... how does she do that without seriously hurting him?

So... it's a bunch of little things on my mind but they need to be set up properly or the story won't work well.

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